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3. Clarity edits
Technical Writing · 32 pages source format
Short sentences. Active voice. Defined jargon. Concrete examples. Cut throat-clearing.
What you'll learn
- Active voice
- Jargon budget
- Examples
Edit pass
Weak: The system should be configured appropriately prior to execution.
Strong: Before you run the job, set `ENV=staging` in `.env`.Do this now
Rewrite one page with: ≤20-word average sentence target, examples for each abstract claim.
Clear?